Hawes Community Primary School

Had I the heavens' embroidered cloths, Enwrought with golden and silver light, The blue and the dim and the dark cloths Of night and light and the half-light, I would spread the cloths under your feet: But I, being poor, have only my dreams; I have spread my dreams under your feet; Tread softly because you tread on my dreams. W.B. Yeats

31 March
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Hooray!

 

 

6 Responses to “Hooray!”

  1. sam and mikey says:

    Thank you

  2. David Eldridge says:

    Harry, what you have written is beautiful. For something to be described as being, &quot; bright and colourful like trickling stars&quot;, is just a glorious simile.<br>You have added your own stars to the starburst!<br>Mr E

  3. harry says:

    this is an amazing peace of writing its bright and couliful like trikilingstars

  4. sam and mikey says:

    Thank you

  5. David Eldridge says:

    Harry, what you have written is beautiful. For something to be described as being, &quot; bright and colourful like trickling stars&quot;, is just a glorious simile.<br>You have added your own stars to the starburst!<br>Mr E

  6. harry says:

    this is an amazing peace of writing its bright and couliful like trikilingstars

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